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Open your heart,
Dont hide from me,
Let me in.

If only i could help you,
The rivers within you,
They flow with life.

It feels cold,
Your hand in mine,
You can cry it will relieve your heart.

Things can be alright,
Maybe even you a stranger,
Will comfort my heart tonight.

I rush you tell me
But im really waiting,
I hope it doesn't take its toll one day.

I am thankful,
That you were here,
That you were there when i needed comfort.

The tears i cry,
Are for your aching heart,
I hope i to come out from the mist.

Its time i put my hurt aside,
And my fears,
Ill stand strong and face it all.

The face you have shown to me,
Is that of a stranger,
But you bring back hope.

I promise you,
That forever i wont,
Forget the stranger that shined for me.

Thankyou.
                                                             


                                        
©2007-2009 ~neongenesis-endsong
:iconneongenesis-endsong:

Author's Comments

This piece was influenced by :iconichibanboshi: its a little long probably, but it is all about how even a stranger can sometimes help the most.

Thankyou my dear, you helped me out a lot :hug:

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:iconichibanboshi:
omg thats so sweet, it really touched me.
your such a nice person not to mention a super dooper brilliant artist.

i hope everything is fine, I think your a kind yet smart person, who is capable
of taking on the world

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Ichibanboshi - First Twinkling Star
:iconneongenesis-endsong:
Thankyou so much, :aww: that might be a little bit to much to say about someone like me, but thanx :hug:

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"Man fears the darkness, and so he scrapes away at the edges of it with fire."
:iconicetrix:
Very touching I must say... it sounds nice and is overwelming... almost shuder in tears~aru^^.

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:iconneongenesis-endsong:
naww, thankies :) im happy it could touch you so deep :)

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"Man fears the darkness, and so he scrapes away at the edges of it with fire."
:iconicetrix:
Lol^^, no prob~aru.

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:iconidle-tears:
that is beautiful.
it really hit the spot.
:heart:

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As the new year dawns all that is the past fades away...

Love your enemies... it makes them so damn mad.

~Idle-Tears~
:iconneongenesis-endsong:
naww thankyou you sweet thing :P

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"Man fears the darkness, and so he scrapes away at the edges of it with fire."
:iconidle-tears:
welcome :hug:

--
As the new year dawns all that is the past fades away...

Love your enemies... it makes them so damn mad.

~Idle-Tears~

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